| "A Demons Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Nessarie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2011 18:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
Any chance that you'll be continuing this? It was a very good premise! |
Title: COOL
Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 20:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT STORY WAS AWESOME i hope you find a way to continue the story you can do anything you set your mind to plese find a way
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Reviewed By: sango2244 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 13:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS AWSOME PLEASE WRITE MORE I LIKED IT ALOT
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Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 17:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
lol, that was a nice sex scene, certainly more fast and furious than others I have read. ^^ I guess you still haven't figured out how to continue it, eh? You could start with the aftermath of what they've just done and perhaps some explanation on the results. I mean, he shared his blood and said the effects would be stronger after they mated but what those effects were and how they feel the next day are important. ^^ That's always a place to start. ;) I hope you continue this fic and I'll keep an eye out for more in the future.
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Reviewed By: heartgirl9229 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks on solid ice, I know you haven't been focusing too much on this story, but will you please continue!!!
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Title: dark hanyou
Reviewed By: dark hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 20:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good but more chaps, it really gooooood
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Title: kag3000
Reviewed By: kag3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 21:30 EST
Comment/Review:
great story! u might want to do the next chap {if u do one. please do one!} as the morning after or something. or inu could leave and kag could be with a pup {or pups}. do something like that please that would be cool!
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 02:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEah, she could get pregnent, and also um since inuyasha is in his demon form, he dosent know what he did. so WAKE HIM UP, AND SEE WHAT HAPPEN! HURRY UP AND REVIEW!!!
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: duranrox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 11:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! great story!
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_swimmer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome story! I can trully say that I've never read anything quite like that before! You have to continue it! it leaves the perfect opening for her to get pregnant, or maybe for him to turn back into a hanyou and get mad at himself for taking her innocence! oh well, your the author, you make the decisions! hehehe! i know I'm rambling on, (blame the fact that I haven't slept in two days) so maybe i should go sleep! it might help! I'm going to put his story on my favorites list and I hope to read some more of your stories later on! ~*~Hanyou_swimmer
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Title: Inuyasha and Kagome Fan
Reviewed By: Inuyasha and Kagome Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 01:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story so far, please continue;)
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas lover 2 ( not sign on) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaahhhhhh another fanfic to add in my favorites. I must say you are a great writer and I don't say this to every one yet so I will tell you know for all to see that you are the first person I said this to. the reason is your the frist person that i read all of your stories and liked all of them. I don't know why though but i so far like all of them others are like 1 or 2 of there stories i like but not you any way update all of your stories please like oh I don't know slave girl! and this one when you can think of somthing any way update sooon.
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Title: its not that bad
Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 08:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
you should keep going.and 8th grade grad walk ant that bad. just don\'t wear shouws that cruse your feet, or steal tose.i did that 2 school years ago. you wear one of thos tips of shous and your feet will be killing you.trust me i know.I HATE THE REVIEW SISTIM
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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