| "Broken Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Hikari Girl On: September 12, 2005 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a awsom fic! I was hoping there would be a story about Seto and Joey. It's such a relife to read a good story after you havent read enny in 6 months due to internet failer! (sorry if my speling isn't that great, still working on spelling corections) Eneyway, for thous of you who havent read this or Broken Darkness, I rcumend that you read it right away! It's like the cure for wanting good fanfictions! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dragon love 1 On: July 26, 2005 14:55 CDT
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(Laughs outragely) I can't belive Yami is pregnet again. If you won't the story were Yami is pregnet. The story is named THE POWER OF LOVE. The story is rated R. The story is really, really good. You continue it. (Halo appers out of nowhere) PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES update soon. From, A girl who has the power of love and love good sex storys(espeicly ones with extra lemons and limes in them)
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Reviewed By: DML (nope...not logged on) On: July 13, 2005 12:41 CDT
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*giggles senselessly about Yami being pregnant* Yeah I had to...anyways, this is going good so far. Keep updating when you have no life - lol
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 02:43 CDT
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Really good update. Seto admitted his feelings. I hope things go a little better for him. I can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 05:23 CDT
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I really love this! I hope they realize their feeling and admit to them. Jou could really help Seto with his company. He is not an idiot and he has a good heart. So does Seto if he would only let it out. Update soon, Please.
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Title: holy snitz! I'm logged on!
Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 00:42 CDT
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Have I not yet reviewed this story? x( Omg, I'm so sorry! It's great so far, keep it up! Update when possible...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I was going to say Kana should take Kaiba's arrogance but I think taking his sight will do it for him. Jou can't get angry but he is compassionate so I think everything will work out great. Kaiba's in love and he can't express his emotion because of fear. He is afraid to show dependence to anyone. Great job plese update soon!
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Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: June 16, 2005 05:38 CDT
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update really really really soon please!!!!! (forgot to say that *halo appears*)
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Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: June 16, 2005 05:37 CDT
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oh my god this is too good!! and go jou! he and kaiba are going to be together right?! offcourse they are .. let's hope so! and sowwie for updating so late.. I had some problems with my computer.. and jou is going to survive it.. with ease.. I hope for him! and now don't let kaiba get mean to jou only because he can't show anger! or be angry at anyone! pwetty please with sugar on top! *uses puppy dog eyes*
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 08:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleive that I was the one that asked for a continuation of Broken Darkness and the others wanted a sequel and I am the only one reviewing ah well, On to the review. I think Jou will adjust just fine eventually, but how will Kaiba handle it. I love it I can't wait to see how Yami gives birth. Update soon, Please!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I really like it. It's a very good start. Update soon, please.
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