| "Say the Words" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: December 16, 2001 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a sweet ending that I'm feeling all fuzzy and warm. You're right-we knew it was gonna end that way, but it's nice to hear Veggie say it. Please feel free to continue writing. You have talent, so you should put it to good use. Peace |
Reviewed By: Felidae [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2001 04:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... I love the fic. It's really cute! ^_^ Seeing Veggie as an a old softie is just the best! And Trunks smirking like daddy...cool. And it's very good, that Bulma has her pride ... some authors always make her so pathetic.
PS: You've broken no No-No rule! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 16, 2001 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cute. I guess Bulma hearing Vegita's conversation would've seemed too easy, so you chose Trunks to do the eavesdropping. Makes sense. I used to do that as a kid and got my butt kicked into the next block for doing it. Looking forward to the next chapter. Peace |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2001 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats a v good fic! i love the way you reflected on vegeta's sweet side, keep it up! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kokonuts On: December 15, 2001 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cute fanfiction. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2001 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
awww! its turning out to be such a sweet fic! continue PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 14, 2001 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not private huh? Let me guess-Bulma wasn't exactly sleeping (hehe). This is getting mucho interesting, so please feel free to continue |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2001 16:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm very interested and am anxious to know what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Mint [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2001 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, this is incredibly well done! You just need to work on your grammer and spelling a little bit and it will be absolutely perfect. You are off to a very good start and if you keep going at this pace, I might just see you on Oprah's list of favourite authors in a few years!!! Keep it up!~Karla |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 13, 2001 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For being your first fic this is pretty good. Keep going. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2001 00:28 CST
Comment/Review:
as your first fic, it sounds really promising! :) i'd love to read the next part! keep it up! |
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