| "InuYasha: Kagome's First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an awaome story great lemon pleze just space out the paragraphs it hurt my eyes anyway awsome story ja ne.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 06:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story... enjoyed reading it... good job... great work... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Title: A very good lemon...
Reviewed By: Astro dude [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 04:02 CST
Comment/Review:
This website needs more lemons like this! >_
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Reviewed By: Kanjikuu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 09:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Im glad you guys liked the story, Ill write more once I get more reviews meeow bye for now
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Title: HI
Reviewed By: darkangelprincess24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI: if you thought it was bad then why did you read it when it was titled "Inuyasha: KAGOME"S FIRST TIME"? OH! good job on the story too!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW GREAT JOB ON THE STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: HI On: August 06, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS TOTTLY NASTY
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: August 05, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was intense! Just put more space between your paragraphs it would help reading it i kept losing my place put that wasn't so much of a bad thing. I'd give it a 15 if i could. Lookin foreward to your other stories. Ja ne.
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: kagome_inuyasha123(nli) On: July 20, 2005 11:15 CDT
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I think it's a great start, I just couldn't finish reading it. If you want to get more reviews you should put actual dialogue in it. Also, you should try making your paragraphs a lot shorter and space them out so people don't get dissinterested because they keep losing their place. If you want, you can send me the story and I will look it over and make a few corrections so you'll get more reviews. my email address is iloveinuyasha123@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 23:41 CDT
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Great lemon! I liked your story a lot and I wonder why I'm the only one reviewing. I better promote this. Anyways, Great pic keep up the good work ^_^!
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