| "Raiden no Ai" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: stupid
Reviewed By: no-one1002 On: June 23, 2011 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is one of the most pathetic stories I've had the misfortune to read lol |
Reviewed By: Rach Mo On: May 21, 2006 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this story!!! I can't wait to read the sequel!!! Rach Mo
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Reviewed By: Chrii On: January 07, 2006 06:56 EST
Comment/Review:
I loooove it! Oh and by the way, chapter 14's messed up. It's about mutilated cereal and a necklace or something lol. I just finished that part.
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Title: so sweet!
Reviewed By: Juney On: September 02, 2005 03:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
really enjoying your story! its so touching and a very original idea. its neat to see what hiten and mantan would truely be like if you befriended them. =) i really hope that your not going to have Hiten killed... that would break my heart..and Akinas T-T Great story! keep up the awesome work and remember to update soon! =D .... please spare Hitens life and not follow what happened in the show!!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Ai On: August 29, 2005 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, and can't wait for more. I think Hiten should Live, but I think Inu-Yasha so that maybe they can battle again. But hey, what do i know.
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Reviewed By: Chrissy14 nsi On: August 26, 2005 02:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh! This was sooooo fun to read!! Never thought about Hiten that much but I love the character you developed him into! Don't kill Hiten onegai!!! Anyways, I love their relationship, its so kawaii and romantic!! Please update SOON!! Thanks for the great story!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 05:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
cute story. write more soon please.and what the hell IS Kagome anyway????if you update email me and tell me.Cinnamonroll_620@yahoo.com ok bye
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 03:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
this is a funny story.keep going with it.i want to see the morning after.
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 15:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
that was an interesting story.if you continue. i'll defintely read it.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: kagome12_2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can u please update your story its so romantic
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: kagome12_2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG this like a soap opera OMG THIS IS SO GOOD!
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 03:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
im confused, is that Kiten? Kouga? Human inuyasha? Naraku even? i think its hiten...i think..? well anyways i loved the plot and story, please update soon ^__&
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Reviewed By: Dark_Kage On: June 17, 2005 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mwahahaha I loved this.
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