| "When She Cries" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the idea of them smoothing each other's frowns. Very sweet and becoming of them. The whole thing was soothing and calming. And though you might want to revise it (some things are a bit rough), you've done a very good job. I envy you. I've tried to do a couple of one-shots but they didn't work out. Anyway, keep it on.
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 14:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww, I really enjoyed this. Original, yet canon, and the length was just right. :] Love it.
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