| "Rin Lies" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Lov eit
Reviewed By: Disi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! You have to update soon!!!!!! I'm going to go crazy without the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: F*B*M On: September 19, 2005 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic I hope you up date it soon
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Reviewed By: Lucient not signed in On: June 12, 2005 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your story is good, but you need to work on making it longer. Pull things out a bit. My story was short and sweet like yours is, but I had alot of people asking me to elongate it. When I did, I started getting more readers. :) I hope this advice helps you!!! :)
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Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story. It was sweet. I can't wait to read what happens next so please put in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: cute_kirara16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i'm loveing your story it's so good.i hope you update real soon. rin and sesshy make a really cute couple.
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