| "The Story of morphing titles." Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akasha The Goddess On: February 28, 2006 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never seen a Gundam Seed fic that is so alternate universe. I really love the whole theme here! Please, don't delay the next update for too long! *puppy eyes*
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Solomaria On: February 27, 2006 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! I loved it very much. I am not very good with English sense it is not my first language. I was able to understand your story very easly for the most part. Like I said I dont know English very well. I like the titles. Very fun to read. I can not wait for the next chapter. I hope you will update soon. I am sorry if this review is confuseing or is hard to understand. I can read english just fine but I am not so good at writing it. I like to thank my friend for reading over my review for me so it may be ledgable for you to read. I have an Idea for the next title of you next chapter if you deside to write one. "101 ways to get get stains out of carpets. A story that has nothing to do with stains or carpets." Yes I know not very good but I liked it. I wish you luck on your chapters and reviews. Good Bye
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Title: Bonjour
Reviewed By: frenchmaid On: February 26, 2006 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bonjour, I loved this chapter. Poor kira got freaked out, but who wouldnt when the man who bought you all of a sudden starts giving you a hand job. I want to see more Athrun and Kira moments though! I love that pairing, not that the Kira and Mwu seens are not welcome. Hope you have find the time to update soon. I have been waiting for an update! I just learned how to send a review a few days ago thanks to my friend hehehe I can be so slow sometimes. Hope you get this review. My computer hasnt been...well...agreeing with me lately. PLEEEEEASE hurry with an update I am dieing from susspence! Until next time! Tootles
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: FallkenSong On: February 26, 2006 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! I love the plot,setting, and creativity you have put into this story. It was really enjoyable. I hope you will continue on with it and update as soon as possible. I hope you reseave many possitive reviews from your readers. I know I loved it. Whats going on between Kira and Athrun? Poor Kira is nothing more than a sex slave to Mwu. My friend recommended your story to me and I am very glad that she did. I am surprised that their are very little reviews. But from the hit count I can tell that you are very popular. Best of luck in your future chapters!
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Title: Good Work
Reviewed By: dancerpeace On: February 26, 2006 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you updated! I was starting to loose hope! Well I guess I shouldnt be talking sence you have updated 2 times sence January so I shouldnt complain. I hope you are able to update again. I really want to find out what happens to poor kira. I find it a little wierd that Mu would be so open about his taste to Kira sense he is his master and Kira is just a slave. I thought that he would just order Kira to do...er....whatever he wants. Poor Kira though I could tell he was very freaked out about the hole thing. Oh Athrun came to see him again. Aw that was nice but I dont really understand what a highwayman is. Ummm whatever I'm sure I'll figure it out. Athrun seems to be some sort of elf. Poor Kira is so confused about whats going on. I want to see more Kira and Athrun goodness. PLEASE! Well anyways great job on the chapter. I love how you title them lol I always get a good laugh. Hope you are blesed with reviews! I know that people dont tend to review all that offten, and it saddens me. Oh well I will do my part. Dont get disscouraged though if you dont get any reviews people are reading you fic I can assure you that. Keep up the GREAT work and please try to update as soon as possible. I usually check every month for updates so you'll have a little time before I start to freak out.Buh-Bye I wish you all the insparation in the world. P.S: I am sorry for any grammer and/or spelling mistakes. I shouldnt have slept through all those english classes.
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Reviewed By: dancerpeace On: February 12, 2006 14:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Great job! Why so long to update though? I really hope you continue. Why does Mu want kira to wear the dress thing? And why is Athrun suddenly coming to see Kira? I thought this was a yaoi fic but maybe I'm just impationt! Hope you are geeting the reviews that you deserve! Do you plan on updateing again? If so please hurry I have been checking once a month for an update! This stroy has really got a hold on my mind! Best of luck with your chapters to come! I'll review again if you update! Promise! Type to ya later! Bye bye.(poor kira, is getting simi harrassed.)
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Reviewed By: M On: January 29, 2006 14:33 CST
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It was such and interesting chapter, with the new place and Athrun. please update soon.
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 29, 2006 08:54 CST
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Hahah I love the titles, so you-like. I've actually only watched the anime a couple times, but luckily this is AU sooooooo yay! Oh, and it's kinds cute how Kira's being messed with a little! He's gets so confused! > < -huggles Kira plushie-
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Reviewed By: Chichiris Life-Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. So Kira ended up as a slave did he well that sucks. Poor Kira well at least he ran Athrun first and then into Muw La flaga but personally I hope he manages to escape and get back to Athrun but that's just me lol. I'm a 100% AthrunXKira Shipper all the way. Well Keep up the good work and please update soon ^^. Saraba.
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Title: Me_Ladie is da bam.
Reviewed By: Me_Ladie On: September 28, 2005 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
First and foremost I hate leaving reviews. Why? Because I sound like a twit. This is the first thing I've read by you, tis good. I gave you a 10 for creativity since i don't read this fandom. So lucky you for a free 10 points. All in all I gave this an i8 because it's a good story. You can always g-mail me your stories. I'm tobeconspicuous@gmail.com. Cheers, Me_Ladie P.S. If it didn't work I'm tobeconspicuous at gmail dot com
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Reviewed By: jureez maude On: September 28, 2005 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haller! yeah...and i thought you were going to continue the story...i suppose you are busy nowadays...gosh..i think your fic was bloody brilliant! I like the way Flay died..though i wish it could be a little more ....excruciating..hehe...i like the way you presented the scenes...they seem so...graphical with all the blood and gore...i hope to hear from you soon...and oh...before i leave...i like the way the romance thing is slowly developed...not too boring...not too fast....(^_^)\/...and by the way...i adjusted my fic's tenses...remember the ridiculous present tense?..yeah..i fixed it..but i'm too shy to post it again..hehe...the hehe thing is natural...(^_^)\/
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Reviewed By: D_S_K On: August 25, 2005 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe your story was indeed well thought out, and has decent lenght. I have no critisizmes to give you you, though I do wish you'd hurry and update as this story has an excellent foothold set in place, and its success has the potential to skyrocket. Will you take that chance and continue? I hope so. Sincerly, Daisuke_Shadow_Kitsune
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Reviewed By: darkling59 On: August 05, 2005 12:47 CDT
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Heh, I like your morphing titles. 's funny. GOod story and character development. Can't wait to see how Kira runs into Athrun again. ^_^ And why Mwu wanted a slave. Ummm... It was slightly graphic with Flay's death, (and most brain matter is grey, i think, not pink, but i guess the blood would make it look pink...) Hmmm...yeah. Good story. There are far too few Gundam Seed AUs out there. Esp. yaoi ones.
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Reviewed By: Alyshia On: June 13, 2005 15:49 CDT
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You are a weird authoress... what's with the title?
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Title: Woops
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: June 13, 2005 06:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think something happened to your paragraphs or the formatting.
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