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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: summersalt On: June 19, 2006 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow very interesting but I am sad to see that you havent updated in awhile. Do you plan on updateing this story again? If so please hurry, I have a deep interest now but if you take to long I cant promise that I will review again. Love the creativity and originalty but i find the relationship between Athrun and Kira a bit lax. I would like to see more development in that area, other than that wonderful job with sticking to the main story line and development between Mu and Kira. Keep it up and please don't leave this story, you have more talent than you think and I'm sure I'm not the only one who can see and appriecate it. P.S: I apologize for any spelling or grammar mistakes.
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Reviewed By: Akasha The Goddess On: February 28, 2006 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never seen a Gundam Seed fic that is so alternate universe. I really love the whole theme here! Please, don't delay the next update for too long! *puppy eyes*
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Solomaria On: February 27, 2006 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! I loved it very much. I am not very good with English sense it is not my first language. I was able to understand your story very easly for the most part. Like I said I dont know English very well. I like the titles. Very fun to read. I can not wait for the next chapter. I hope you will update soon. I am sorry if this review is confuseing or is hard to understand. I can read english just fine but I am not so good at writing it. I like to thank my friend for reading over my review for me so it may be ledgable for you to read. I have an Idea for the next title of you next chapter if you deside to write one. "101 ways to get get stains out of carpets. A story that has nothing to do with stains or carpets." Yes I know not very good but I liked it. I wish you luck on your chapters and reviews. Good Bye
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Title: Bonjour
Reviewed By: frenchmaid On: February 26, 2006 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bonjour, I loved this chapter. Poor kira got freaked out, but who wouldnt when the man who bought you all of a sudden starts giving you a hand job. I want to see more Athrun and Kira moments though! I love that pairing, not that the Kira and Mwu seens are not welcome. Hope you have find the time to update soon. I have been waiting for an update! I just learned how to send a review a few days ago thanks to my friend hehehe I can be so slow sometimes. Hope you get this review. My computer hasnt been...well...agreeing with me lately. PLEEEEEASE hurry with an update I am dieing from susspence! Until next time! Tootles
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: FallkenSong On: February 26, 2006 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! I love the plot,setting, and creativity you have put into this story. It was really enjoyable. I hope you will continue on with it and update as soon as possible. I hope you reseave many possitive reviews from your readers. I know I loved it. Whats going on between Kira and Athrun? Poor Kira is nothing more than a sex slave to Mwu. My friend recommended your story to me and I am very glad that she did. I am surprised that their are very little reviews. But from the hit count I can tell that you are very popular. Best of luck in your future chapters!
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Title: Good Work
Reviewed By: dancerpeace On: February 26, 2006 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you updated! I was starting to loose hope! Well I guess I shouldnt be talking sence you have updated 2 times sence January so I shouldnt complain. I hope you are able to update again. I really want to find out what happens to poor kira. I find it a little wierd that Mu would be so open about his taste to Kira sense he is his master and Kira is just a slave. I thought that he would just order Kira to do...er....whatever he wants. Poor Kira though I could tell he was very freaked out about the hole thing. Oh Athrun came to see him again. Aw that was nice but I dont really understand what a highwayman is. Ummm whatever I'm sure I'll figure it out. Athrun seems to be some sort of elf. Poor Kira is so confused about whats going on. I want to see more Kira and Athrun goodness. PLEASE! Well anyways great job on the chapter. I love how you title them lol I always get a good laugh. Hope you are blesed with reviews! I know that people dont tend to review all that offten, and it saddens me. Oh well I will do my part. Dont get disscouraged though if you dont get any reviews people are reading you fic I can assure you that. Keep up the GREAT work and please try to update as soon as possible. I usually check every month for updates so you'll have a little time before I start to freak out.Buh-Bye I wish you all the insparation in the world. P.S: I am sorry for any grammer and/or spelling mistakes. I shouldnt have slept through all those english classes.
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Reviewed By: dancerpeace On: February 12, 2006 14:38 CST
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Great job! Why so long to update though? I really hope you continue. Why does Mu want kira to wear the dress thing? And why is Athrun suddenly coming to see Kira? I thought this was a yaoi fic but maybe I'm just impationt! Hope you are geeting the reviews that you deserve! Do you plan on updateing again? If so please hurry I have been checking once a month for an update! This stroy has really got a hold on my mind! Best of luck with your chapters to come! I'll review again if you update! Promise! Type to ya later! Bye bye.(poor kira, is getting simi harrassed.)
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Reviewed By: M On: January 29, 2006 14:33 CST
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It was such and interesting chapter, with the new place and Athrun. please update soon.
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 29, 2006 08:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Hahah I love the titles, so you-like. I've actually only watched the anime a couple times, but luckily this is AU sooooooo yay! Oh, and it's kinds cute how Kira's being messed with a little! He's gets so confused! > < -huggles Kira plushie-
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Reviewed By: Chichiris Life-Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. So Kira ended up as a slave did he well that sucks. Poor Kira well at least he ran Athrun first and then into Muw La flaga but personally I hope he manages to escape and get back to Athrun but that's just me lol. I'm a 100% AthrunXKira Shipper all the way. Well Keep up the good work and please update soon ^^. Saraba.
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Title: Me_Ladie is da bam.
Reviewed By: Me_Ladie On: September 28, 2005 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
First and foremost I hate leaving reviews. Why? Because I sound like a twit. This is the first thing I've read by you, tis good. I gave you a 10 for creativity since i don't read this fandom. So lucky you for a free 10 points. All in all I gave this an i8 because it's a good story. You can always g-mail me your stories. I'm tobeconspicuous@gmail.com. Cheers, Me_Ladie P.S. If it didn't work I'm tobeconspicuous at gmail dot com
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Reviewed By: jureez maude On: September 28, 2005 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haller! yeah...and i thought you were going to continue the story...i suppose you are busy nowadays...gosh..i think your fic was bloody brilliant! I like the way Flay died..though i wish it could be a little more ....excruciating..hehe...i like the way you presented the scenes...they seem so...graphical with all the blood and gore...i hope to hear from you soon...and oh...before i leave...i like the way the romance thing is slowly developed...not too boring...not too fast....(^_^)\/...and by the way...i adjusted my fic's tenses...remember the ridiculous present tense?..yeah..i fixed it..but i'm too shy to post it again..hehe...the hehe thing is natural...(^_^)\/
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Reviewed By: D_S_K On: August 25, 2005 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe your story was indeed well thought out, and has decent lenght. I have no critisizmes to give you you, though I do wish you'd hurry and update as this story has an excellent foothold set in place, and its success has the potential to skyrocket. Will you take that chance and continue? I hope so. Sincerly, Daisuke_Shadow_Kitsune
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Reviewed By: darkling59 On: August 05, 2005 12:47 CDT
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Heh, I like your morphing titles. 's funny. GOod story and character development. Can't wait to see how Kira runs into Athrun again. ^_^ And why Mwu wanted a slave. Ummm... It was slightly graphic with Flay's death, (and most brain matter is grey, i think, not pink, but i guess the blood would make it look pink...) Hmmm...yeah. Good story. There are far too few Gundam Seed AUs out there. Esp. yaoi ones.
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Reviewed By: Alyshia On: June 13, 2005 15:49 CDT
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You are a weird authoress... what's with the title?
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