| "Rouge Knight" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2010 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very entertaining. I for one wouldn't mind an update.
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Reviewed By: Queberjeque [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 13:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
where is the first chapter? All that appears is a disclaimer, yet the 2nd chapter seems to be a continuation.
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Reviewed By: DJ On: June 26, 2005 23:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
You wil need to increase your rating, probably up to NC-17 level since you have sex in the story. Somehow the story feels rushed. Set up of events and why things are occuring may need to be included and further developed. Same is true of character development.
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