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| "To break a heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: juju8839 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its too bad u only ave 2 review, but I really like ur story,even though it has been awhile since U have updated ( really long time I mean we r in 2006 and I see no changes) I hope u ocntinue the story..I dont mind if kuramas character is out of line alittle, tRUST ME i HAVE READ worst.. so keep it up.
| Reviewed By: Dot. On: July 12, 2005 12:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Uh, it sounds kind of weird. First of all, Kurama is way out of character. He wouldn't make fun of anyone. Second, did he sleep with Miso, and is that why she's pregnant? If he didn't sleep with her, then he would've known it was a joke. It's pretty confusing. You need to straighten some things out, fix up the spelling and grammar, and make the chapters longer. Good luck!
| Title: juju8839
Reviewed By: juju8839 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am proud to say I am the first to write a review,,, I like this story plzzz continue it its interesting..good luck with it..
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