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| "Jedi Knight 1/2" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 09:20 CST
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HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!! What the hell, this is true evil!!! Damn, that out of my system, I resepct this story a lot, and there is more I want to see. Not to mention see Jedi Justice handed down on Darth Genma's ass, MWAHAHAHAHA!!!! Still, I like this story, and I also want to see more of Hopposai, there is much more to the perverted bastard than meets the eye, afterall, as the progenitor to the Anything Goes School, there is much more to him knwoign the force than any of the others, he jus tmight not use it. Neh. Anyway, update often and long, please, love this story.
| Title: Review for Chapters 1-3
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really adore this story. I thought it was going to be dorky and awful when I read the summary, but I gave it a try and it's FANTASTIC. I think the grammar, word choice and word "arrangement", or flow, could use a bit of improvement, but the story itself is WONDERFUL. I can hardly wait to see what happens next. -Akane attacks Ranma? -Ranma reveals the Truth in large confrontation? -Ranma reveals the truth to his mother first? -Ranma puts Akane (the Violent BITCH with anger management and guilt-displacement issues) in her place finally? -Martial artist free-for-all at Genma? -Nodoka realizes her husband isn't holding up HIS half of "traditional values"? -Nodoka goes apeshit? -Yoda gives various people a "stern talking to"/verbal bitchslap? -Happosai lives vicariously through events to have a "good old time"? ... ... ... ... I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for writing, Kin
| Title: You ever gonna update?
Reviewed By: Death Fan Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 17:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
You havent updated since june. Your not gonna update are you?
| Reviewed By: palgober [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you write on anime addventures because this lifted straight from jedi knight 1/2 started by secret01 in 2003 and continued by Lionheart and Sgt. Chibi De`Oh in 2005
| Reviewed By: Nameless Author [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 17:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok here is my question. How did Ranma find the cube, secondly how can Yoda read Ranma's mind if he is thousands if not millions of light years away? No offense or anything, but this story is lacking details.
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