| "More to Life" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Beautiful story through and through. The plot was great as well as the dialogue and character positions. Anyways, I really liked your story and I wish you luck and prosperity. ^-^!
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Reviewed By: ValliGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I thought it was really cute seriously I liked it and I really hope you keep continuing with this story cuz yeah I want to know what happens next...........soooooo don't stop! Keep up the god work!
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Title: More to Life
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: July 07, 2005 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read both chapters at once and they were both very well written. I can't wait to read the next one. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good first 2 chaps. I like that you didn't make inu and Kagome jump all over each other. It woul have been too rushed and all that jazz. neways, can't wait for the next chapter!
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