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Reviewed By: Lynndawn Zando On: April 12, 2008 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is the Shikon Jewel the cause of the barrier colapsing because Kagome did have that urge to get home to see what was wrong and if the demon souls in the Jewel did something. For your third chapter I really liked how you made Kagome turn into a cat (truely creative). The battle against Naraku was really inspiring. Did You know Hiei's and Yukina's mother's name is Hina? Could you change it please? But if you don't that's fine I just want you to hurry up and update. You'll need to tell us how Kagome turns back to being human and how exactly she turned into a cat demon in the first place instead of making everyone guess the possibilities on how. Will she turn back on her own or does another demon help her? When are Shippo and Kagome going to reunite and does Kagome get her back-pack back? Will she be seeing Sesshomaru? Does Yukina remember Kagome from when she was young? It was 500 years ago. Why does Koenma blame Kagome for the barriers because it doesn't look like he has any evidence to her doing it. Does he know about the Jewel? I'm taking an easy to figure guess that Kagome is Hiei's light, right? I just love Kagome and Hiei pairings the most. This story is really creative, but it seems really original in its own way don't you think? I can't tell you how many people type fanfictions and don't seem to know how to put the stroy together, put creativity, sometimes horrible grammer as if they have never taken an English class before. It is just ridiculous on why they bother especially if they don't check there spelling for errors, not to be mean, but it sucks. But this is a splended story. I love it so far.
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Reviewed By: midnight lost child24 On: June 20, 2007 10:19 CDT
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hiei's real mothers name is hina just to let you know. by the way love the story. it's very creative.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: kk On: July 31, 2006 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story update soon plz
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Reviewed By: Renee Firefox On: May 16, 2006 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee update
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Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story please update agin soon. The story is so interesting, so much is going on. How is hiei and kagome going to hook up, how does kagome change back, how did Kagome bring down the barrier and when did Shippo become a god? Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: December 22, 2005 15:18 CST
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okay, had to reread the ending twice before I got it.... but sometimes I skip parts, so not your fault.
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Title: YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!! IT'S JUST PERFECT THE WAY THE STORY LINE FITS!! IT'S CREATIVE YET IT'S JUST LIKE IT WOULD BE IF THIS WAS THE ACTUAL TV SHOW!!!( I hope I don't affend you by saying that) You have the characters personalities perfectly and .... and .... IT'S JUST FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!!.
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Reviewed By: MidnightRain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how this story was started and I think and hope that you continue it. I'll be looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 21:38 CDT
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ooh...pretty fic 0_0
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 12:56 CDT
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Now that was something that I didn't suspsect. Kagome's the cuase of the barriers falling? I'm sure it wasn't on purpose however it happened. Of course, saying that may be a ploy to get the guys even more motivated to find her I suppose. Especially if she is the one that can help Hiei out with the problems that he is having. I'm on the edge of my seat with the suspense. You've done a wonderful job with this chapter, detail and length is good. Not every chapter has to be action packed, it draws out the suspense very well and leaves us wanting more. I applaud you for choosing the pairing, few people take up the challenge and even fewer people do it justice. You are succeeding with your characterizations quite nicely. I anxiously look forward to the next chapter, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: The IllMadeMiko On: August 24, 2005 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, aces on everything. This is completely original. And what is more, it is even completely different from the other story. I was afraid that it would be similar and so wasnt sure. But this is great! I dont ever recal a plot like this one. The barriers have fallen. And the reakai-tentai are about to use her lil brother to get to Kagome? Ack! Suspense suspense, I cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 05:18 CDT
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This chapter was absolutely wonderful. Seems like a Hiei/Kag pairing, I adore those. The amount of detail that you go into in this chapter is perfect, you have me ensnared already. I cannot wait to read the next one. Please keep up the wonderful work and update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 04:50 CDT
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Nice. Looking forward to the next update! :)
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 16:10 CDT
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oh please continue!!!!!! it was so freakin' good!!!!!!!!! by the goods your a good poet abd writer!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 23:52 CDT
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uh, something happened to my review to delete most of it. If you want my detailed opinion, please email me @ KinSamaIY@aol.com.
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