| "Pain Don't Mean a Thing" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 13:34 CDT
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I share your pain. The English language is just so complicated. Oh well, we all try our best. I can't wait for your next chapter! If you don't update, I may find that the 16th chapter to Heart of Ice just never seems to reach the net. ^____^ Byez
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Title: Hi again
Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 13:26 CDT
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Great chapter! Not trying to be annoying, but I think Yuske is spelled Yusuke and Koennma is spelled Koenma. Then again, there may be different spellings. ^__^ Anyways, later.
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Title: Hiya
Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 13:23 CDT
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As promised, I'm reviewing. I like your story! I think it's a great start. There a some gramatical errors here and there, but I still think your story is very good. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kagome_girl On: July 23, 2005 22:29 CDT
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Wow I loved your story well update soon
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 22:30 CDT
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pretty good pretty good...Pretty Ricky sucks!...sry. I love your new chapter but it confused me a bit...WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: author (who's reading AI issue 22!!!) On: June 27, 2005 19:29 CDT
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i just got a computer so i can update for 2 months for free!!!! i got to get back to my mag now!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon.I want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 22:37 CDT
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i luv this fic, its short, but very cool! pleez update soon!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:12 CDT
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try to annoy me... just try i dare you if you can do it i'll dedicate a chapter strictly to you gcvd. good luck anyone can try to if you want to win a chapter dedication!!!!!lol there is another email......^.^u -.-u
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:09 CDT
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oh the ending was a cut ending of chapter 2 i have dedlines and not enough time to write it cause i'm leving for the weekend soon so i had to put it up so my monday offer stood.... i will revise soon maybe someone comment on the song!!!! how was it? i'll finish the chapter later..... i need to put it as a work in progress don't i? hmm well i'll have it up soon then i'll write chappter three then type it i'll bring my writing spiral with me on my trip away from the computer!!!!!!!! thanks for your suport u guys(and gals) !!!!!!! i'm going to get 2 emails now...... i still find that really funny..
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:03 CDT
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i don't know why it's pink or why it hasn't updated my revisions!!!! arrrrgh i'll see what i can do k guys..... funny i'm gonna get an email about this.......lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 14:30 CDT
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Your new chapter is really good but the end confused me a little. And you don't know annoying until you have messed with me. You could say Im a little crazy...lol...^.^Keep up the good work. Update soon...my threat stands
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Reviewed By: kuroykitsunemiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Please, write more chapters! I really, really love this fic! Heheh... You made it original by adding the evil father into it making the kag/yus cousin relationship thing perfect! KEEP IT UP! Twinkeh
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Reviewed By: angeldemon45678(not logged in) On: June 25, 2005 21:26 CDT
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I had actually already read your story before you asked but couldn't actually get reveiw. (Computers a little messed up)I really like your story and can't wait till you update next.I will be updating my story 'Fear' some time this coming week, hopfully. This story is really good! Please update as soon as possible! Ja ne! O.^
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOO!!!!UPDATE real soon please. Don't disapoint me and abonden. Your story is so cool. if you don't update in atleast 1 month I'll start to bug you.
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