| "Pain Don't Mean a Thing" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 22:30 CDT
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pretty good pretty good...Pretty Ricky sucks!...sry. I love your new chapter but it confused me a bit...WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: author (who's reading AI issue 22!!!) On: June 27, 2005 19:29 CDT
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i just got a computer so i can update for 2 months for free!!!! i got to get back to my mag now!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon.I want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 22:37 CDT
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i luv this fic, its short, but very cool! pleez update soon!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:12 CDT
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try to annoy me... just try i dare you if you can do it i'll dedicate a chapter strictly to you gcvd. good luck anyone can try to if you want to win a chapter dedication!!!!!lol there is another email......^.^u -.-u
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:09 CDT
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oh the ending was a cut ending of chapter 2 i have dedlines and not enough time to write it cause i'm leving for the weekend soon so i had to put it up so my monday offer stood.... i will revise soon maybe someone comment on the song!!!! how was it? i'll finish the chapter later..... i need to put it as a work in progress don't i? hmm well i'll have it up soon then i'll write chappter three then type it i'll bring my writing spiral with me on my trip away from the computer!!!!!!!! thanks for your suport u guys(and gals) !!!!!!! i'm going to get 2 emails now...... i still find that really funny..
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:03 CDT
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i don't know why it's pink or why it hasn't updated my revisions!!!! arrrrgh i'll see what i can do k guys..... funny i'm gonna get an email about this.......lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 14:30 CDT
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Your new chapter is really good but the end confused me a little. And you don't know annoying until you have messed with me. You could say Im a little crazy...lol...^.^Keep up the good work. Update soon...my threat stands
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Reviewed By: kuroykitsunemiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Please, write more chapters! I really, really love this fic! Heheh... You made it original by adding the evil father into it making the kag/yus cousin relationship thing perfect! KEEP IT UP! Twinkeh
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Reviewed By: angeldemon45678(not logged in) On: June 25, 2005 21:26 CDT
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I had actually already read your story before you asked but couldn't actually get reveiw. (Computers a little messed up)I really like your story and can't wait till you update next.I will be updating my story 'Fear' some time this coming week, hopfully. This story is really good! Please update as soon as possible! Ja ne! O.^
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOO!!!!UPDATE real soon please. Don't disapoint me and abonden. Your story is so cool. if you don't update in atleast 1 month I'll start to bug you.
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Reviewed By: the authoressmwar! On: June 23, 2005 09:19 CDT
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ok now that i've got an review i'll pull an all nighter and try to get the next one up by monday...._.-u i'm not finnished writing i think....
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 21:21 CDT
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very interesting, I bet Hiei is more confused than ever lol. I look forward to reading future chapters. Please update soon.
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Title: the esteemed authoress(who hopes essteemed means what she thinks it does) note to fans cause she dosent use chappies for that instead
Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 23:12 CDT
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yay it's up no voteing on parings and if your wondering about her 'charm' read my bio to find out and some other stuff on this story!!! thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 23:00 CDT
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wow you guys...22? i don't know whats going on but i did post a chappie i see what i can do
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