| "When deminsions collide..." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: LightPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2002 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I apologize for such terribe ratings. I just personally greatly disapprove of inapropriate behavior such as changing gender, etc. I also beleive that you rated your story terribly, it should be higher such as PG13, or you should at least display some type of warning...
Anyways, you wanted feedback, so there's mine. |
Reviewed By: DEMONIC FANGIRL [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2001 21:26 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL!!! Evilness!!! ^_^ About like my story 'A Cure for Zelgadis'. I still give it all tens! |
Reviewed By: Branir On: December 15, 2001 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good goin' Azo! Couldn't have done better myself, keep writing, this ones gonna be good! |
Reviewed By: DEMONIC FANGIRL [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2001 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting Times!!!! That book was funny!!!!! ^_^ love Diskworld! Love Slayers! love FF7! Hated lodoss...But this looks to be like it's gonna get FUNNY really quick! I like the descriptions in the beginning, made it seem more real but then you slacked off in the second have, got 'blind' as I would say. |
