| "Proof of Affection" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: BRAVO!!!
Reviewed By: vegeta and future trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2015 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved it from start to finish!!! Amazing job here :) im happy
that bulma didnt take vegeta back so quickly, she asked all those
questions she needed answers to, and fortunately got them, yay! I
loved how vegeta said he was going to marry bulma(aww) that ending
was so funny with the mention of the "ugly mug" and "geeky face" XD
"Did he tell you what an asshole you were?â€- another
fav funny part XD Enjoyed it so much i hope you write about their
wedding!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE oh and when vegeta told bulma to
"obey" him, i was like OH NO this motherfucker didnt just say that
lmao, im glad that bulma felt the same way i did! lol
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Reviewed By: pink_princess18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 13:34 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story im about to start the sequel.Im really looking forward to it your a great writer who really knows how to properly portray the characters. (Lol@trioptic human..i dont know why but that was funny)
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Title: DAMN THIS STORY ROCKS OUT LOUD!!!
Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It actually lets out a true portrayal of Bulma and Vegeta's relationship. Because I do think Bulma would be very hurt that Vegeta did not rescue her. Rawk on write more!!
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Title: ...Wow!
Reviewed By: Creator of the moon On: August 13, 2005 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is absolutly great! It's exactly what I was hoping to find. While I was reading your fic, I could truly think that it was real. Go on with your writting, it's simply wonderful!
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Title: I LOVED IT
Reviewed By: LUISA On: July 07, 2005 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it i absolutly loved it and thats weird its hard to satify me but wow excellnt i love your writing and at first i thought it was going to suck cause it only has two reviews but you proved me wrong in so many ways i loved and i would love it if you made a sequel....also maybe the reason there are not rewiews maybe is because people think since it does not have rewiews it sucks but i loved i would not expected that killer story with just two reviews but damn if peple dont rewiew i will review like five more times cause damn i loved it only that why does vegeta get to have the great relationship with future trunks why cant bulma and also you should make a school fic with the dbz because with your talent it would be excellent more than perfect well i was not going to review but damn your story was so good that i had to.you had vegetas charcter and everything i also loved the lemons they were steamy and sended mental images as i was reading it.and in the end you made the lemon hot but very sweet i never thought that could be possible and that never could anyone achive it but never say never well pleaseeeeeeeeeee make another story if not a sequel then a high school fic or just a fic involving my two favorite characters vegeta and bulma yay :) anyway im here to tell you that if you think you did a bad fanfic then your mentaly challenged no offence ok then ill be leaving and if you want some ideas as to what do a fanfic about email me at angel4uboyz144@aol.com bye and i hope |
Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 23:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was excellent in my view. I think you kept the Prince in character despite the fact he had to say the dreaded "L" word. Bulma was excellent too, not weepy, but with the temper flaring at times, a match for him. Good explanation for his lack of action at that time. A nice steamy part as well, and I really loved the way the end teetered on uncertainty about what was going to happen next. Great job.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: June 14, 2005 22:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
If you're planning on a sequel, do it cause it's grea!!!
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