| "Tempered Restraint" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: hehe
Reviewed By: MissHalo3 On: November 17, 2008 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe that as great i loved it! He got shot by yuyas gun haha
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Reviewed By: emeraldoni1 On: May 18, 2006 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, please make another one to that! I want to see all the ways Kyo tries to seduce Yuya. I love them! By the way, I really like all your other stories too (Ive only read a few though) I wish they could be longer, like a series, but thats okay. There still great. And their not way OOC. I mean, they are a little, but not too much. Yeah, anyway, good job!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Chrissy E E On: March 24, 2006 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was amazing. This story has every bit of the potenital to be a lemon. PlEASE make this into a lemon. but over all it was interesting to read. very well done, i love you works
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Reviewed By: Macmac On: December 07, 2005 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good one. Kinda disappointed with the ending, though. SEEEEEQUEL Please! I wanna read about his bath! hehe.
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Reviewed By: Macmac On: August 18, 2005 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was fun. Now about that Lemon sequel...Haha!
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