| "blood red sword" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: dreamskat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man this is asome I love it keep righting you'r grate at it :)
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Reviewed By: sparklerfish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
hun... you really need to use commas... the story isn't bad, but you really need to use commas
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