Title: I like but is that all?
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this one but it seems unfinished. And I have almost no idea what the french is. Sorry but English, first gutter German second, and Japanese third. I barely know what Oui is. And chapter 3 seems to cut off a few words when it extends past the bounderies of the page. I really want to see this fic continued and if possible be notified of any updates. Maybe I could help with ideas? I do that for a few authors I beat for and I could give you referances to talk to them if you wish? Asterixa and Vampiress-Kagome on fanfiction.net and Daisuke_Shadow_Kitsune here on mediaminor. I also beta for kittykittyyaoigirl on adultfanfiction.net. Her e-mail address is yaoi_fan1989@yahoo.com, I tell you this because it's hidden on aff. Anyway please reply. Even if it's to tell me 'Fuck Off'. I would like to know either way, and I won't be offended at all if that is what you decide. Thank you for your time. Arie Date
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