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| "Foxhound" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: It Was The One-Eyed Man!
Reviewed By: Wolfie-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 11:27 CDT
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I JUST NOTICED. CAIM, MUCH!?
| Title: *Continued*
Reviewed By: Wolfie-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 14:52 CDT
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Also, It saddens me to see a fabulous fiction just... die... like yours has. Honestly, I'm really upset. Probably because I'm an over-emotional 12yr old... but ne'er mind. I hope it is only due to the fact these take ages to write...
| Reviewed By: Wolfie-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best and most well-written fanfiction I have ever encountered. Hell, it's better than most books I have encountered. This is possibly the best thing I have read, let alone one of the best. Your grammar is flawless and the storyline keeps me guessing. I hate those fanfictions where Naruto hardly knows Ino then goes on to clean out her tonsils in under five chapters. You raise interesting points which are both true and to the point, both of which are undeniably involved in excellent fiction. Writing this much can be counted for your determination and skill in the fact that you could even have the patience to go through with it keeping the same flawless technique you use consistent. Everything is well explained and you capture emotion well within the bounds of this story. This standard of writing is breathtaking as I have never seen such well written work. Perhaps only Sir Arthur Conan Doyle is the only person to exceed that but this is absoloutly stunning. I would say 'Well Done' but in this case I think it to be too much of an understatement. More specifically I think I should say- 'Give this author a Docterate and proclaim them one of the best writers to grace this Earth in the millions it has been created! Well done good sir/madam!'
| Reviewed By: scheherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going out on a limb here and guessing that this story might be dead, seeing as how it hasn't been updated for about 3 years. Just wanted to express my sorrow. I just stumbled across it today (yes, I have just spent a large majority of my day reading it) and it is definitely one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. If you are ever planning on finishing it, I look forward to that day with great anticipation.
| Reviewed By: NouvelleVoix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has this story really been abandoned for 2 1/2 years? How sad... I was loving the new super cool Naruto (though I was a little concerned about him getting too powerful). Anyway, I loved your fanfic, and I was curious as to how Naruto's relationship with Ino was going to turn out. I'm hoping that the dates on the site are just messed up, or something, but knowing my luck, they aren't. If you're posting this fic somewhere else, or something, send me a link!
| Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks up from pages scattered across desk. Glowers malevolently* WHY have you not continued this fic? I only just found it and I am soooooo impressed with it. You've got a really really really good story here. I insist that we get a new chapter, pronto! I am assuming you're kinda leaving pairings open ... Fix poor, ignored Gaara up with someone. whether it's someone from within the anime/manga or an OC, I don't really care. I like Gaara, murderous intent and all. He's one of the coolest characters from the series. You've done wonders with Naruto and Ino. So I am begging, pleading and ORDERING you to update this. Otherwise you'll just have to face my evil monkey army of DOOM, led by Kuronue, bat demon extordinaire, expert in annoying people into doing whatever he wants them to... Hmmm ... you know, your description of Kyuubi kinda reminds me of the legends I've read about Inari, the patron god of foxes .... Sorry just an idle thought. So that all said I absolutely love this story and am immediately putting it on my favs. update soon please.
| Title: Foxhound
Reviewed By: kanashiiSeizansha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 18:35 CDT
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I thank you so so so soo much for making a good story! I absolutly love foxhound. it's rare these days to come upon such a wonderful story. i'll be watching for updates! Your Firm Supoter(sp?), kanashiiSeizansha
| Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Un-freakin'-believable! You write with incredible talent and eloquence. I don't know what it is, but you've got it--as you're so fond of saying--in spades! I simply cannot understand why you have so few reviews. Unless, of course, people are just so blindsided by what they read that they honestly don't know where to begin or what to say. I admit with some reservation that I was hesitant to read this fic, solely because I've always been such a Naru/Hina fan. A huge mistake I'm glad I did not make. Ino always seemed to be at best, Sakura's foil, and at worst, a two dimensional, tertiary character. Canon or not, you've created a dynamic new dimension to Ino, which I for one, find quite enjoyable. You haven't updated in nearly a year and a half and it is marked as 'Completed', so realistically I doubt I'll ever get to read it through in its entirety. I can only ask that you find the urge to pick up where you left off, preferably sooner rather than later. Please don't pull a DameWren and abandon such a wonderful story.
| Title: pairings
Reviewed By: Zaara the Black [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 21:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
put kaka/ino in next story
| Reviewed By: Mordrid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that I haven't read the whole story yet but i wanted to say that you are a writer that has all the interests that i have when it comes to writing a story. On another note I must say... YOU ARE THE FIRST PERSON I'VE READ A STORY BY THAT ACTUALLY LIKES LONG STORIES!!! I have found authors that actually apologize for long chapters!! can you believe that! AHEM... Anyway I must say you are a phenomanal author please keep up the good work with everything else you have or will write.
| Title: cool
Reviewed By: rdsjr_1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fan-fic, please update soon
| Reviewed By: raykay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Please update and soon. I can't wait.
| Reviewed By: kage_the_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY.I just cant keep my eyes off my computer now becuz of this story,but man you need to update,im going to lost w/out it now.I realy enjoyed it,so I wish the best of luck being a great fanfic wrighter!!
| Reviewed By: neosildrake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey hey! Where's the next chapter! No update since july 2005? That's unacceptable! Such a good story and you stop right when it gets interseting! I command thee: UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: midnyte_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 11:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is WOW! You're personal voice is very distinct, without all of the broken sentences that usually come from it. As someone who is struggling with that aspect of my writing I can appreciate it. Your basic plot is logical. Sauske being an ass, Naruto's attitude to Kakashi, Gai and Lee- enough said. You're very honest with those charecters and keep them in their intended personalities (save Naruto, but you've explained that.) You're plot twists are very origional as well. Ino having a psycic bloodline, the Unlimiter, Tobias Tinkerlot and the Village of the Hidden Night. What I particularly enjoyed was your glimpse of Gaara's personality. I love complex charecters, as such I've always been fond of Gaara and Sauske. Yes, Sauske, you can't deny he's complex. But Gaara is without a doubt my favorite. Over all, this is a superb work. But I do have one question. Where's Sakura? The news that Naruto's back has been the buzz of Konoha, it's unlikely she wouldn't have heard it. After the thourough verbal lashing she suffered from Ino, it's unlikely she would just ignore him alltogether, I think she would at least try to apologize, which could prove to be an interesting situation if he still has feelings for her, what now with Ino being at least of interest. I'm also wondering about the civilian hostages in the decamated village, what's to become of them? Sorry its my humanitarian side shining through. Please update soon Midnyte Chylde
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