Reviewed By: marsinfein On: June 17, 2005 08:26 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: This is nicely (and realistically) written - I hope you continue it!
Title: wow, dbz, that's a long time ago! Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: June 16, 2005 11:22 CDT Comment/Review: aaw poor Bulma, and good old Goku, clueless as ever lol.
