| "Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: BeautyWolf92 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 06:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was fantastic.I hope you write more.
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Title: Love IT!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: cra [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I hope you write more soon
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Reviewed By: Bloody Wolf Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 16:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was pretty good! I hope you make another chapter soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kristy On: June 27, 2005 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting. You have to check grammer though. On epart you say Hige is 18 to 25 years old and the next sentence you say he 's 18. other then that it was cool. Write more soon. I especially love the Hige in his boxers part. lmao.
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