Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 13:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
hm, for a first shot, I'll have to advise longer chapters and a plot summary would be helpful as well. Maybe if you're really busy, posting every other thursday would be better, in order to post more in a chapter? Something this short didn't seem worth my time to read, and you want people to read it, right? of course. So, good luck, don't give up!
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