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| "Silver Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 13:47 CDT
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Just a heads up. You might want to go through and fix the formatting. As it stands right now, it's hard to read, I couldn't get past the prologue. :/ I'll check on this later, it's *sounds* interesting.
| Title: Sensational
Reviewed By: Starlytemint [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I just reread your story for about the 5th or 6th time so I thought it about time that I wrote a review and tell you how great this story is. I love what you've done with the characters espicially the Generals because you've given them each their own personality where as a lot of people make them all the same basic character. You've also given them good reasons to be with their Princesses and have made their relationships make sense. I too have always liked Mina and Malachite, but aside from their looks and rank as leader I never quite saw how personality wise they fit together, but I love what you did with them and how Mina's vanity caused her to seduce the mighty General without him knowing it. I was curious to see what you would do with Ami and Zoisite since that is a couple that I have never understood (probably because I grew up watching the Dub and still have a hard time seeing that Zoisite is not female), but again I must say Bravo in your believability because it is very much in both their characters to make an agreement like that (I would have never thought of it). Now my favorite couple has always been Rei and Jadeite (I was not expecting that part in the last chapter, but I loved it), but I have to say that in your story my favorite is Lita and Nephrite with their whole 'Taming of the Shrew' act going on. I would like to hear how their wedding kiss went. ^_^ I don't know why people are complaining about Serenity and Endymion because I think they're perfect. You've given them plenty of time, and I think that with their compassionate personalities they would accept each other without argument and come to that comprimise (and really what do either of them have to complain about). I love what you've done with Queen Serenity. You've taken an original approach to her and instead of making her the loving, omnipotent, all-knowing Goddess that everyone else makes her out to be, you've made her a mother and a widow hardened by war with the weight of ruling the solar system on her shoulders (like she probably would be), and given her flaws making her...well human. I also love Queen Psyche, don't ask why, but I just do, and it actually made me laugh at how she and Queen Rhea fight. I actually like how you portray Chaos. I agree that his goal is not to enslave or rule anything, just complete death and destruction at any cost, and he comes off just as you wanted...as an asshole. By the way, what happened to that part of the chapter? Chapter six seems to missing the second half. Anyway, I will finish my rant and leave you be, and I'll just prey that you will update soon because I literally can't wait. In fact, I think I'll go read it again:)
| Title: Silver Dreams
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 19:27 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: SailorAquarius [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yessss another chapter, and another excellent one might I say, I was so excited to read it, and now that I've reread your story over 3 times now I thought it was time to write another review. I know your story is AU, but I have to say that I acutually find it more believible then the actual story of the Silver Millenium. I never really bought into that whole "Forbidden Love" thing. Now I have to say that I am a big Sere/Endy fan, but I think you're giving them plenty of time (more so than the other couples) I don't know what people are complaining about. And there first kiss was sooo sweet. I also think that you're keeping Serenity very well in character (she wasn't always a clutzy crybaby) and Princess Serenity was usually more regal and mature then Usagi. I had to laugh out loud at Rei and jedite though. As soon as Sere realized something was wrong, a whole list of things ran through my mind. First I thought that maybe Lita was refusing to kiss Nephrite, then I thought that maybe Malachite's lust had consumed him and he had decided to have his way with Mina right on the church floor:) but I was not expecting Rei and Jedite to be going at it, but the more I think about it the more it fits. I was kind of sad that we didn't hear about the other couples first kisses though:( Anyway, I'm running out words and you know I think you're great, and you know I love you're story, and I'm sure you can guess that I can't wait for the next chapter. So please please be quick ^_^
| Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again... Well, you already know I think this story is amazing, since I prodded you via email back in the summer about updating the story, so I won't go on (or else I'll *really* go on, and y'all don't want that, trust me). But I will say that I wish that your story was illustrated, since you've got such fantastic imagery. Heck, I'll settle for fanart of the characters, especially the princesses, and all their outfits; the descriptions of the costumes sound amazing! Considering the sheer visual descriptiveness here, you might actually want someone to illustrate (I'd volunteer myself, but I missed the board meeting where artistic talent was handed out...).
| Title: The best thing I've ever read
Reviewed By: SailorAquarius [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent absolutly EXCELLENT!! I dont usually read stories on this site (Infact I created an account here just to review this story) but I was bored one day and I came across your fic and I'm so glad I did because this is one of, if not the best things I've ever read. I mean the style, the emotion, all of it pure genius. I love General/Senshi fics, well GOOD General/Senshi fics because there are a lot of bad ones out there, but this one is fabulous because it actually shows a reason why the Senshi and Generals make good matches. Well if you cant tell, I LOVE this fic (I stayed up till about 5am reading it), but I just hope you havent given up on it because the status says completed, but please I beg of you to continue if only one more chapter because I must know how it ends. Please Please Please write more^_^ I'll be here waiting.
| Title: EH? What do you mean, "completed"?
Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am _completely_ enthralled... This is amazing... But you've put it as status complete, why? I've just finished chapter 6 and it seems as if things are just beginning... I do hope you haven't lost interest or inspiration for this story, it would be a damn shame, truly it would... One more thing, is this intended as a prequel to the Moonverse canon, or a slightly AU Moonverse? My personal vote would be for the latter, since I find this "prequel" much more favourable, but meh. Again, I hope this isn't the end (and that you actually are reading this ^_~)... Ciao!
| Reviewed By: Selene1440 On: August 11, 2005 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story, its very well done. i hope to see more of it soon
| Title: I'm not sure if i reviewed this fic before.
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the second time i have read this fic and like the first time i loved it. But i gotta wonder what is takeing so long with the update? i hope you havent given up on this fic. i really and trully enjoyed it. it's awsome. i hope you continue on with the story and post another chapter soon.
| Reviewed By: sam25_2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story..please update soon....
| Title: awsome!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great!!! your story is wonderful. i loved it! the story was very well written, well put together, detailed and well thought out. you have an enormous amount of talent and skill.i give your fic a standing ovation. i know i am rambeling but i just want you to know how great i think this story is plus i know how good it feels to get good reviews. anyway i hope you continue with this story and please updat again soon.
| Title: review
Reviewed By: delariean [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please oh please put your story Forever here.. Pretty please???
| Reviewed By: Silver Moon Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, please update soon
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