| "Sea in the Sky" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: big
Reviewed By: Willie_c00 On: June 27, 2005 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, lol turned me on haha
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Reviewed By: Timothy Phionix On: June 22, 2005 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is that it was gooooooooooooooooddddddd... Sorry it was hard to lift my finger at that moment. It was a well writen fic. and it took a little stop and go to get though this one.
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Reviewed By: Your gf On: June 18, 2005 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style is good, not descriptive enough maybe. I didn't notice any grammer mistakes, definitely creative, and definitely... enticing. Lol. I think you kept them in character pretty well. I enjoyed it.
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