| "Innocent Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 02:23 CST
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Poor Yami. I hope next time Vellik is the one who dies. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 02:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was worth the wait. Great chapter. Poor West. At least Yami is back home and safe. He needs to feed who will be his savior and feed him? Maybe Bakura, or Seto?!! Have fun on your cruise.
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Reviewed By: Zuki On: September 24, 2005 14:20 CDT
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verry cool.
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Reviewed By: D.S.K. On: August 01, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intriguing. Very well written, and it holds great creativity. You'd go far as an author if you tried. Please update A.S.A.P. I am looking forward to reading more of this excellent story.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 02:18 CDT
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It's progressing at a good pace. I really like it. I love seeing Bakura as a protective older brother. Seto is great as a protector. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 05:12 CDT
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wow, this is so awesome! plz keep going with it!
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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really like this fic. I can't wait to see the next update. I hope Yami at least tries to consider that Ramsey is saying he is sorry and that he would never try and hurt him intentionaly. Then again, if I was ignored like that or so many years, maybe my mind would be made up. So cufuzzling. Alright. I can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 09:05 CDT
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Great fic. Maybe Ramsey will change, I hope so. Seto is already feeling the pangs of love. I can't wait til you update but have fun on your vacation!
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Title: canten
Reviewed By: cantenthewolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow i loved it Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 07:59 CDT
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Mediaminer sucks sometimes! I finally got to read it all and it is really good. Poor Yami and Bakura. I kind of feell sorry for their dad but not too much Please update soon!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 07:57 CDT
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I liked what I could read but unfortunately, the beginnings and ends of each line were cut off.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 04:16 CDT
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I liked what I could read but unfortunately, the beginnings and ends of each line were cut off.
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