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Reviewed By: Jezebel Parks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 16:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked this. You kept Len perfectly in character. Nice job ^^
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Reviewed By: Shinatama On: August 08, 2005 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very orginal , you were able to explore the characters feelings very well. Think about your spelling a bit more , very creative. Very sexy! ^-^ Please write a sequal to this. I think I really enjoyed it! >.< Also , you seem to forget some simple writing grammer factors too often and it spoils an other wise very good Fanfic. - Tamy
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: PRoyalAngel2004 On: August 06, 2005 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey. this is sexy.ehhehehe. hope u write a sequel to this
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