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Title: I was cute
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you should conitune to see what might appen after that... it would be good
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Title: Wonderfull!
Reviewed By: Shinatama On: August 08, 2005 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like most of your work I loved it to death. I do agree that the characters are very un-like themselves but , hey , this is a fanfic! Same comment as before , practice grammer! Anyway , love ! Please make a sequel!
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Reviewed By: quicken On: July 10, 2005 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very predictable, even for a hentai fic. None of the scenes seemed original at all. The only good thing was that there seemed to be a decent reason for the two to make love in the first place.
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