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| "Whear Do We Come From Trunks ???" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: jeeva On: March 11, 2002 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really good. I really like the idea! Please continue! I love this fic!!!! | Reviewed By: kandi On: February 15, 2002 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really cute and funny. please finish it | Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2001 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like the idea you have going, it's very cute. but it all seems very rushed, and i think you need to spend some more time on spell checking your work. also, when someone talks to someone else there are spaces in between like this:
"hi," he mumbled.
"what?"
like that. I really do like the idea, i think if you spend some extra time and effort on grammar and spelling it would be much better. and easier to read. please know i'm only saying these things to help. |
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