| "Heero Yuy, Seventh Grade Teacher?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: grapesmshr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2002 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was pretty damn funny! What a bunch of brats! Well, Heero certainly did put them in their place... Very, very cute! |
Reviewed By: han On: May 25, 2002 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is halarious. |
Reviewed By: LadyJessy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2002 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was cute, although i hated the part where Vegeta beat up Heero. I *REALLY* hope you write chapter where Heero kicks Vegeta's ass!!! I think you could do it if you say that the reason Vegeta won the first time was because he took Heero by surprise. The reason Heero could feasibly beat Vegeta up could be because of experiements Dr.J did on him in the war to make him faster, stronger, more powerful, etc. Heck, those experiments could even include giving him some Saiyajin DNA or something!!! Please write more soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2002 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never, ever seen a seventh grade like this before in my life!! How did you come up with this anyway? |
Reviewed By: Heero/Darien lover On: December 17, 2001 02:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,
Wasn't THAT bad!!!. Hehehehe, just jokes it was funny though i think a show0off wit Vegeta and Heero is called 4, wit Heero winning!. Anywayz,i liked keep writing!!!.
Bye ;)!> |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2001 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sometimes you just need a good laugh! Keep it up! |
