| "Consequences" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... the drama was really touching... good job... great work...
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Title: UH... WOW
Reviewed By: DarkAngle Shaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 19:26 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW FANTASTIC!! it was realy great good job!!
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Title: UH... WOW
Reviewed By: DarkAngle Shaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 19:26 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW FANTASTIC!! it was realy great good job!!
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Title: Very good & Very realistic!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 02, 2005 15:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Kagome's mom had the reaction that almost every mom would have, lol. I like that you added that very realistic POV. I also loved the epilogue. Soooo cute! Well done.
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Reviewed By: momiji_sohma_gal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 12:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. very interesting. You can certainly feel the pain Kagome suffers, can't you? But I think she made the right choice. you should never kill a child. Great work, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 11:23 CDT
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Ayumi is always the odd one out. Eri and Yuka are going "Kagome's losing her future!" Ayume is going "Love conqueors all!" when Kagome is telling them about Inuyasha. This was fun! She hit him with a broom! *smothers laughter* Yeah I guess a mother would chase after the bad boys with brooms, a father would drag out the shot gun. *thunder crashes* Brainstorm! How funny would it be if Kagome did have a dad who was away all the time and finally comes back and he is a anger management graduate? Oh, the humanity!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 19:09 CDT
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This is developing well. Now I can't wait for the final part!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 14:28 CDT
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Intriguing that you would bring that up. I never thought Kagome would be the type to consider abortion. However, as a story in itself Kagome seems to reflect the panic that every underaged mother-to-be must feel when they realize that one little tryst has an unexpected eighteen year consequence. I love to see this go on. The stress she'll be under, the potential reticule from family and friends. Defintely explore this further. The characters may be someone else's but the story can speak about to a lot of girls. The message it carries is important.
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