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Reviewed By: Snoop-Dogg [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 14:39 CDT
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=O YOu should continue this, its a really good story
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Reviewed By: Vanquisher [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic, it was hard to find under all the crap that is filling the net but I am thoroughly enjoying it. Keep up the good work in the future.
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 09:56 CDT
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I really hope you get a chance to update soon, Naruto/Hinata pairings are always my favorate, and I really want to see the wedding. I am very impressed with your writing ability. If you ever need another Beta, I'm usually available.
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Reviewed By: Lisy111 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kaaaaaaa!!!....i love this fic!!!!...its sooo good!!!i really really hope that you keep on updating it....and i'm so sad to hear about your father....my heart is w/ yours
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Title: Aoidragon
Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
here i am thinking, "hey, there's only 8 reviews here? thats not right, this is one of the better fics i've read" then again, i first found this on AFF.net, so there has to be much more reviews, ne? thought so. anywho, keep up the good work, i'll be looking forward to it. ~*Aoidragon*~
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Reviewed By: ADCurtindolph [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, by far, the best Naruto fic I've ever read. I hope that you keep updating the series. I want to see a Naruto/Hinata lemon as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: Xrlderek [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fanfic.. I've always been a NaruHina fan :)(hopefully lemon soon? :P) Anyway, I think the spelling and writing style is very very good, and the story itself is good as well! Looking forward to the next chapters.
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Title: THE BEST
Reviewed By: DemonEyesKyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. The plot is terrific, the characters are still themselves for the most part, and this is the most enjoyable story i've read here, ever! :D :) :D :) :D :) Keep going, i look forward to the next release.
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Reviewed By: Crolynx(Not signed in) On: October 04, 2005 23:00 CDT
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Good Chappie!!! Sorry to here bout your dad. Hope things go well for you and that you have the friend and family support you need. Update again soon, PLEASEEEE!!!!!! But only when you have the time. Well gtg, Ja Ne Crolynx ;p
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Reviewed By: Dragon Master 3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. I enjoyed that immensely. I agree with the hinataxnaruto. I think it's probably going to end up like that in the manga. Either that of naruto is going to be alone.
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Reviewed By: didi kat On: September 09, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. Who sent Naruto the letter, and what's this separation going to do to Lee and Sakura's relationship? I can see Lee being devoted to her no matter what, but I'm not to sure about her. Also,I think you should get Sasuke a girlfriend, that poor boy needs some love'n Update soon
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Reviewed By: Makokam On: July 20, 2005 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i just noticed you only had one review, and I said to myself "How can that be?" So here I am writting a review... that's more encouragement to keep writting and doing it quickly than an actual review, which I've found is often needed more. Anyway, your fic is one of the few truly good fics out there. I don't remember when it was that I picked it up, but it is good and I look forward to the next chapter. You did well with the sound nins. The Uchiha house was.. odd for some reason, not sure why. And.. you've got a good story going here. Sorry for the lack of actual commentary, but I'm just not in the right mindset for it. Oh, couple more things. Sakura and Lee was done we'll. So was Naruto and Hinata. The most important part in pairings is to make them belivable, which you have done very well. Now, I make two requests. Some hot love between Naruto and Hinata, and for Sasuke to find someone. Toodles -Makokam
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Reviewed By: didi kat On: July 01, 2005 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your story. You've managed to keep everyone in character and your plot-twists are very interesting. I love the parings you have going. I always thought that Hinata was a much better love interest for Naruto than Sakura. Anyway, update soon I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
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