| "Gold Masquerade" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Suishou Haruka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 21:56 CDT
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hii1! ..er.. I new here.. xD.. but not in fanfiction xD.. you know that page ne?? xD.. I REALLY.. like ypur storya.. is sooooooooooo .. HOT *---¬*.. just wanna aks you if you have ..er.. put this story in fanfiction??.. plz.. tell me!!.. tell me..!!! ..because maybe I'll translate it !!.. ne.. plz tell me!! *w* my email: suishouko@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Kokuyousen On: September 07, 2006 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait... In chap.1 Krad loves Dakku, correct? Ends up with Sephiroth and is pretty much forced into being a whore, being taken from the person he loves..then abruptly falling in love with his "captor" for absolutely no legitimate reason? After being hit and forced to perform "bed favors" for said captor, that he LOATHED only one chapter earlier. Its not a very believable story. -_- Not only that, but, the way you characterized Krad/Dark is horrendously off. T_T Having the characters ACT LIKE THEMSELVES attracts readers/reviewers. "Warping" their personas into something else is just...irritating.
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Reviewed By: Anime_Angel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE! I must read more of this! It's soooooooo great!
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Reviewed By: Fei Rel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods, almost actually shed a tear. Eyes did water a bit, but not much. Great work! Would love to read more, hope Krad doesn't become obsessed on revenge because of this mindless torture on him. Stupid Dark, well now he know's what a great brother he had, and I repeat, "had"! Maybe seph will learn to love Krad.. maybe not, stupid stupid stupid Ira. Muahahaha! Ok, I'm done now.
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Reviewed By: Junnaiko On: September 29, 2005 11:17 CDT
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Awwwww....this actually the only time I ever feel sorry for Krad
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Reviewed By: =] On: August 20, 2005 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH! It's really good.. Are you going to stop updating? Because I really like the fic! =] Keep on rocking!
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Title: Gold Masquerade
Reviewed By: Kazuki U [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story!!! You made Krad NOT seem so sadistic from what I've seen in the series.... Good job!!!!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: August 01, 2005 22:09 CDT
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whaaaaa pooor krad!! die stupid ira!!! stupid sephy leading on krad ! you(sepy) deserved to be hated by krady!!!
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Reviewed By: Monster Envy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome I love it, please update soon or feel the wrath of my man eating wet noodle BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: June 24, 2005 23:28 CDT
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i love it!!! why does dark owe sephy money anyways?? and when will krad be able to return home??
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