| "behind are family's backs" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm one of those grammar-nazi's where if you mess up on a lot of common mistakes (shore-sure, to-two) I get kind of ticked off. Now, this was decent writing, but PLEASE spell check, spell check, spell check.
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Reviewed By: stickman of fury On: July 13, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was ok
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Title: Howdy
Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic wasn't bad at all... it was a good idea (kinda like Romeo and Juliet) but the thing is that you just need to get more pratice and work on your grammer... I enjoyed reading this fic, Ja ne
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 23:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
like inuyashalover04 said it didn't suck. I liked it a lot. As you continue to write lemon stories you'll get better at them and will get the butterflies out of your stomach so you can put your heart into it. I know that it's nerve racking writing lemon because it makes you feel dirty but trust me you'll get a hang of it then soon you won't be able to stop writing them. Read my one- shot lemon "Friends?" and find out what I'm talking about.
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Reviewed By: :-) On: June 21, 2005 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked where u were going with it...but read through it again...some sentences and spelling is messed up.... he KNEW that is it was wrong...not "new"....my new shoes were 50 dollars....i loved the story anyways
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 10:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
you dont suck. you did very well. if you plan on writing more lemons, then check out my story "christmas love for inuyasha" it has alot of lemon content. It will help you with your next lemon story. keep up the good work...
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