| "Asymmetry" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: WinterSolstice1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was short, but it held so much strength and meaning behind the few words. It is extremely poetic & beautifully written. The reader can feel the passion behind it, wh shows that sometimes minimal words mean everything. I love the use of asymmetry, and it is very original (at least ive never seen it before). You really have an amazing writing style and a captivating way with words. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very lyrical...i love it, 2 thumbs up! (wow, i didn't know I had such a big vocabulary...although compared to yours, 'lyrical' is nothing!)
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 08:25 CDT
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I have just one word to describe this...amazingly beautifull...oops...allright then...two words ;) good job!!:-D
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very nice. I love your adjectives, and though it was short, it still got the point across. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 20:26 CDT
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that would be a great poem! nice job.
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Reviewed By: GiniroAmadare [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 15:03 CDT
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Aww... That was cute in a lemony-goodness sort of way. Good job! ^^.
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