Reviewed By: Wren On: December 17, 2001 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, I'll be honest. You're good at writing the middle of a fanfic, but your beginnings need work. You go a little too fast in the beginning.
That was touching though. I like how you wrote Duo. Sweet and caring. Actually wanting to help poor Heero.
Keep it up! You've got a good style of writing! |
