| "Madame President and the Alien General" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: I like it
Reviewed By: kitcatpawed On: December 28, 2011 21:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg this story has so much potential and who doesnt love a goku(aka sexypants)/oc fic :)! Please please please continue ill wuv you forever! And i kno you dont get on much more but ive ended up reading all your stories on here and theyre all great!....specially "saiyazon origins." But anyways if you ever get the chance please continue theres so few good dbz/oc stories and your just amazing at them XD! Keep up the fantastic work! ¢¾xoxo¢¾ |
Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The saga continues well. Thanks for introducing the other DBZ members as crew mates, and incorporating Radditz and others into this. It's quite interesting, and I enjoy the two presidents you have created. Please continue this entertaining story.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 16:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fiction was interesting, and worked out well. The main character, I liked the fact she was willing to do what she needed to help her people. The only complaint I have is that I'd like to see more of what happens with the planet and her relationship afterwards. LOL. Are you going to write her in another fan fiction?
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