| "Vulnerability" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: WufeiNeko (not logged in) On: September 13, 2005 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All in all, a very eye-opening read. The concept is unusual, and you are keeping the characters very true to the series (with a little deviation, but not much). I would love to see this finished. The formatting at times makes it hard to read, but that made me more determined to see the end. Your concerns about keeping Juri and Saionji in-character are justified, as they are probably the most complicated of the series. I applaud your efforts.
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Title: You're Here Too?
Reviewed By: Utena Himemiya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what the audiance likes and you use it to your advantage. You know how to characterize and make them seem human and go through a beautiful plot full of intrigue and sexual tension.
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Red Rose Touga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
his is truly amazing. It should be a featured fanfic. Characterization is good, plot is fabulous and so are the grammar and punctuation. You make pairing these odd characters fun and enjoyable. Also, you make it believeable. Kudos to you!
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Title: The Best Fanfic JuriXSaionji
Reviewed By: Oneesan no Miroku Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. You have a unique style and keep the characters in character while having an outstanding plot and being a well written fanfic. Do continue posting the chapters here. I read your fanfiction.net version, so I'm glad to see it here as well.
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