| "bonded" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It makes Zeke seem like a good guy. You said you'd continue this if someone asked, well i'm asking continue, please, I can just imagine what would happen if Tray found out about this. But just so you know you do make a few carelesss spelling mistakes. You'll wanna watch out for that.
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: detakohime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 03:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blush* Huh....that was different OO
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 20:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic, but seriously, watch out with your run-on sentences and comma splice errors. They make it quite hard to read.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: MudvayneMasochist On: July 28, 2005 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really Good Story with excellent writing style
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