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Reviewed By: Tee_02 On: October 09, 2012 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Reading your fic has left me feeling warm and fuzzy! Good job ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 03:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first saw the summary of your story with Sesshomaru paired with an OC, I admit that I was scared. But this story blew away all my fears and made me actually like Sesshomaru. The part where he named his daughter after Inuyasha's mother made me cry. You handled the two brothers reconciliation beautifully and without a hint of falseness. Truly this story is wonderful and one I will come back to read again and again. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: DawnGoddess87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 05:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot! A great story with an awesome OC. I know that I can't expect this brilliance with an OC from every author, but I shove common sense aside and hope! *so happy*
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this one all the why through. I have to love Charlotte...she is so dealisiously [sp] vulgar... And the chararcter developement of Sesshoumaru was not rushed, which I also enjoyed. Another fine story!
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Reviewed By: zohar On: July 06, 2006 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice story and great main character. I really enjoyed reading it and was shocked it didn't get more reviews. I'll be sure to look out for more of your fanfics in the future:)
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Reviewed By: Sara (Rayne) On: June 06, 2006 06:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just recently found this story and i thought it was great, i couldnt stop reading it and the ending brought tears to my eyes, i just want to say your a terrific writer and this story was excallent, do you ever plan to make a sequal to this? it be interesting lol but i really enjoyed this story and plan to read your other ones, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Reba Jean (not logged in) On: December 29, 2005 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story & your character Charlotte. It would be interesting to see how the 'rest' of your timeline/story played out, but it is complete enough as it is. Plenty of open areas for sequels though.
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Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 19:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stands and applauds* I cannot get over how great this story has been. It is beautifully written. Each of your chapters painted a wonderful scene. If you do decide to write an epilogue, I'll be here waiting!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: chiaztolite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great update! I kinda feel sorry for Leiko though, even though we still don't know if she belongs in the good guys group or the bad ones. Is this going to be a love triangle? Don't tell me he's gonna take one mate and one concubine!
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Reviewed By: chiaztolite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I'm so glad I found this great story! I like Charlotte a lot! Even though she could be really vulgar sometimes... But she has all the qualities to become a worthy mate for Sesshoumaru, and plus, she's so cute. You made her just like a cat! And great job in keeping Sesshoumaru in character. Very believable. I do hope that you'd emphasize the channelers thing more, seems like it's going to be a big issue in your story. Please keep on writing, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: October 03, 2005 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's too bad that a lot of peeps won't give a story with an OC in it a chance. This should have more ratings than ten. I like Charlotte. She tough and smart; sexy and strong. A good contrast for Sesshoumaru. I plan on recommending this story when I post the update for my own. It's funny, well-paced and has enough action and twists that I'm looking forward to the next installment-
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Reviewed By: Kaneasami On: October 03, 2005 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, an update...so the plot thickens... *stupid grin on face*
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Reviewed By: Jovian Fleet Commander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 04:12 EDT
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Drama! And fluff! But most importantly is the fluff. Charlie appears to be like Miroku... His reincarnation, perhaps? I could see this giving him some trouble... Or more like alot... kekekekee. JFC (Almost sounds like KFC)
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not signed in) On: September 09, 2005 09:51 EDT
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Another great chapter. I especially enjoyed their outing to the beach. LOL.
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Reviewed By: Jovian Fleet Commander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 02:18 EDT
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And back into the past! Now with Charlie... Hm. I smell possiblities. JFC
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