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Reviewed By: Reba Jean (not logged in) On: December 29, 2005 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story & your character Charlotte. It would be interesting to see how the 'rest' of your timeline/story played out, but it is complete enough as it is. Plenty of open areas for sequels though.
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Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 19:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stands and applauds* I cannot get over how great this story has been. It is beautifully written. Each of your chapters painted a wonderful scene. If you do decide to write an epilogue, I'll be here waiting!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: chiaztolite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great update! I kinda feel sorry for Leiko though, even though we still don't know if she belongs in the good guys group or the bad ones. Is this going to be a love triangle? Don't tell me he's gonna take one mate and one concubine!
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Reviewed By: chiaztolite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I'm so glad I found this great story! I like Charlotte a lot! Even though she could be really vulgar sometimes... But she has all the qualities to become a worthy mate for Sesshoumaru, and plus, she's so cute. You made her just like a cat! And great job in keeping Sesshoumaru in character. Very believable. I do hope that you'd emphasize the channelers thing more, seems like it's going to be a big issue in your story. Please keep on writing, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: October 03, 2005 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's too bad that a lot of peeps won't give a story with an OC in it a chance. This should have more ratings than ten. I like Charlotte. She tough and smart; sexy and strong. A good contrast for Sesshoumaru. I plan on recommending this story when I post the update for my own. It's funny, well-paced and has enough action and twists that I'm looking forward to the next installment-
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Reviewed By: Kaneasami On: October 03, 2005 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, an update...so the plot thickens... *stupid grin on face*
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Reviewed By: Jovian Fleet Commander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 04:12 EDT
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Drama! And fluff! But most importantly is the fluff. Charlie appears to be like Miroku... His reincarnation, perhaps? I could see this giving him some trouble... Or more like alot... kekekekee. JFC (Almost sounds like KFC)
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not signed in) On: September 09, 2005 09:51 EDT
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Another great chapter. I especially enjoyed their outing to the beach. LOL.
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Reviewed By: Jovian Fleet Commander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 02:18 EDT
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And back into the past! Now with Charlie... Hm. I smell possiblities. JFC
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Reviewed By: Jovian Fleet Commander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 01:42 EDT
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Hm, if a plane flew over head at a low altitude, would that deafen Sesshomaru?
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not signed in) On: September 06, 2005 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story for awhile and it just gets better and better. This is the best Sesshomaru/OC story I've ever read! I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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Title: Yippy
Reviewed By: Kaneasami On: September 04, 2005 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for the quick updating. Charolette is just so great! Can't wait to see how the story progresses.
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Reviewed By: Jovian Fleet Commander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 02:38 EDT
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I was going to ask a question if her brother was going to goto her house and accidentally end up where Charolette is too, but that seems to have been thrown out ;_; I suppose Sesshomaru is going to get a visit to LA? Hmm... Several amusing thoughts accompany this idea. \o/ JFC
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Reviewed By: Kaneasami On: September 01, 2005 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, very engaging-this has been my word of the day...I can wait to see how this progresses. Living in LA myself, Charolette's character is rock'n! Please keep up the awesome work.
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Title: leet
Reviewed By: Jovian Fleet Commander [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 22:46 EDT
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I love this story. Its quite new and different from the many other fictions I've seen and I enjoy reading it alot. I don't have any questions as of now, but I'll ask should they ever arise. That aside, this fanfic for the win \o/
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