| "Forever Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: November 27, 2005 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the wait was definately(sp?) worth it! that was so awesome! but if inu dies, i'll cry... and you don't want to see me cry, i cry badly! (and if you live far away, i'll hire someone to cry at your door) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: koga's girl 67 On: November 26, 2005 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It so sad, you should die. it was a good damn ass story, pleas dont let inuyasha die, pppppppppppppppppppppppppplllllllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeeee eee
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Title: Sssswweeeettttttt
Reviewed By: Inus little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 19:32 CST
Comment/Review:
This chapter is sweet!Oh and if you kill Inuyasha I will stop talking to you and I will die from saddness (kidding lol) but plz don't let him die plz plz plz plz plz plz (plz means please incase you didn't know)
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: November 26, 2005 02:34 CST
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You have a point if it was for that it might have been over. He can't die again. After all she went throught, they just found each other and now this.
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Reviewed By: Pink Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! CLIFFY!!!!! must...read.........more!!!GAH!!! other than an evil cliffy, great chappie! ^.~ update soon ^.~
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: November 25, 2005 17:13 CST
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o.O :'-( I can't believe you did that!!! You must update in less than 2 weeks or I will be mad!!
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Title: umm...
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: November 25, 2005 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again, 3 days late. are you going to write more?
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Title: uh..
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: November 23, 2005 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the new chappy is a day late. i don't mean to sound mean, but, what's taking so long? this is such a great story, i can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 19:01 CST
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Either they are really understanding people or just have very open minds. Since they meet Kagome they have been on adventures and learned a very long history lesson. Actually now that I think about it it sounds pretty cool. ANd Inuyasha got him O so cute puppy ears back. aND Sesshy is hinding something. If Inu is a hanyou then Sesshy has to have demon blood too. Which means Inu brother knows Kagome. But why doesn't he want Inu to know?
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Title: HaHa!! chapter 25!!
Reviewed By: tuckerman135 On: November 22, 2005 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read chapter 25 and i love it!!! Please keep up the great work!!!
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Title: Questions and something really funny
Reviewed By: Annua On: November 20, 2005 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you ever considered in being an author? Because you could change this story a little bit and the names and all,and you could publish this as a real story and not just on the computer!!! And did you know Keades name is spelled Keade not Kaede. And that Inuyasha's name means Female Dog Demon,and if they took off the last A off the name it would mean Male Dog Demon. Well I have to go now I have school in the morning and it is 11:35 right now so goodnight and I will continue in reading your story when the next chapter is up. --Annua ps.how do you write stories on here because I have been trying,but I can't figure it out I can write stories on fanfiction.net,but I can't figure how to on here?Thanks bye!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: November 16, 2005 16:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, can't wait to see the battle chapter!
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Lady Akina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That was amazing! Keh...This chapter was really awesome! *blinks* Um...yeah...*anime sweatdrop* ..Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens! I hope they beat some Kuro behind. *nods* Keep up the good work.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Lady Akina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought she would take it like that! ^-^ Soo, loved the chapter! Please keep up the good work on the story. Can't wait to read more! ~Lady Akina
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Reviewed By: UpDaTe On: November 15, 2005 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update it was so good . update
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