| "Forever Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl On: November 15, 2005 20:57 CST
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I ran out of room back there if u knew me in person then u'd know i'm real talkative i annoy this one boy alot by always talken bout inuyasha to him!LOL i understand your point about the story eventually getting boring but you could start new stories about them (i keep myself busy by thinking of stories and art to create) so i'm INU crazy but good luck with the rest of the story i'll let u know if i have any more suggestions and i'll get an account on here soon and i'll hope you'll like my stories too but good luck to u!!
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl On: November 15, 2005 20:53 CST
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Thanks for the compliment i'll email u soon as i get an account on hear but i was thinking about drawing things about the story, so i'll try and get to drawing that stuff soon, because u know i have my "Insperational" days and then those "why did i ever start this?" here's a tip if you ever decide to draw drink some cold lemonade for some reason if the creative mind is hidrated then your more likely to do a better job i know it sounds weird but it worked for me! My suggestion for the end would be something like IF u decided to kill Kuro or get him sent to prison or something like that then a nice romantic scene for the end would be during the battle after they finally beat Kuro Inuyasha keels over and kagome goes to him concerned she has tears in her eyes and maybe says things like "Please Inuyasha not again don't leave me again" but just as she feels his heart sease she see's something that really shocks her in front of her she she's "HER" inuyasha and they exchange some words like i miss u so much or "I'll luv u always and forever!" and Inuyasha (modern Inu) is actually him (haven't thought about how but will let u know) after all these years he just didn't remember (kaede said he wasn't a rencarnation) so inuyasha never really died he just sort of dissapeared, but after there words are exchanged then he returns to Inu2's body and he wakes up in kagome's arms and the 2 look deeply into each other's eye's and kiss for a while and of course for kicks sango and miroku interupt |
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...I haven't read a story like this in a long time...I haven't reviewed anyone's work in forever also...I love it so far. I'm still crying horribly...While I was reading this, I was listening to Probally wouldn't be this way, and I just lost it on the first page...your a really good writer for someone of young age...well, we're the same age so I shouldn't be talking...lol, well, update soon, and if you want...can you check out my stories as well? Just a thought...well, ttyl. Luv Ty
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Reviewed By: pickle juice On: November 14, 2005 00:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update and soooooooon, last chpt wasn't long enough...you should have inu read the story cause then him and kag can get back together...awww.
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl On: November 13, 2005 20:56 CST
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please write more then 30 chapters this could be like some sort of mini series i have a suggestion for the ending if you'd like to hear it let me know at the top of the chapter page.
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl On: November 13, 2005 20:54 CST
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This is truly one of the best fan fics i've ever read i read 1-25 today and it's inspired me to maybe write one my self i'm more of an inu art freack (i have so many drawings i've created of him and kagome) but i even felt like crying acouple of times (i know i sound pathetic) but this really is one of the greastest fan fics and i wish you luck in further inu stories!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl On: November 13, 2005 20:38 CST
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P.S i'm going to try and post some of my art work on one website eventually and i'd like you to see it and i guess i wasn't the only one that cryed LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! one last thing i'll never forget the first time i watched inuyasha it truly opened a door to a whole world of possiblities and so has your story (i never steal material from anyone i even feel uncomfortable copying inu art so that why i mostly do my own) and i know how it feels to be crapmed in the back of a car but let's add another 10hrs.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl On: November 13, 2005 20:34 CST
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This is truly one of the best fan fics i've ever read i read 1-25 today and it's inspired me to maybe write one my self i'm more of an inu art freack (i have so many drawings i've created of him and kagome) but i even felt like crying acouple of times (i know i sound pathetic) but this really is one of the greastest fan fics and i wish you luck in further inu stories!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu rules On: November 13, 2005 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story please please update it soon please can't wait for the next chapter x~peace~x
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CRYED SOOOO MUCH!!!! HOW CAN YOU KILL INUYASHA?!!!! OMFG THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 00:02 CST
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Sweet twist on this! I actually didn't see this coming (and usually I catch on pretty quickly)! Congrats to you on that! I love how everything is being played out again, but from the future this time around. Of course, there are still some secrets that I have absolutely no clue about (Inu for one), but I can wait to find out in the next chapters, as long as I don't have to wait TOO long! :)
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 19:45 CST
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::looking peeved:: that's it?! that's how you end the chapter?! ooooo, you better update soon, but not two weeks, less than two weeks!!! :-)
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Reviewed By: theultimatedarkness On: November 12, 2005 18:14 CST
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YOu can't leave the story off there. I insist you finish it. I haven't been this hooled in a story in a long time.
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Title: WOOOHOOO!!!!!!! awsome
Reviewed By: tuckerman135 On: November 12, 2005 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah hey this is tuckerman135 and WOOOOO HOOOOO. I just finished reading your last update, your story is AWSOME!!!! I knew your story would be good but not THAT good! Keep up the great work.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: November 12, 2005 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this story has everything an inu fan could ever want! i love the plot! how many chapters are you planning to make? and another thing, how long do we ahve to wait to find out the truths about sango, miroku, shippo, and inuyasha?
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