| "A Long Lost Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: dead sun On: March 03, 2004 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story, i love stories with original characters like new princes and stuff... but, in the prologue, you said the princess' smile could make even endymion's brother (a very serious guy) smile.... but romy doesn't sound serious at all! and then you said darien met serena on their wedding day. but romy has a flashback of some years before when he left for the earth and he asks endymion to take care of tys while he's away! please upload the rest of it soon, i'm curious to see what is gonna happen!
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Reviewed By: dead sun On: March 03, 2004 18:52 CST
Comment/Review:
very good story, i love stories with original characters like new princes and stuff... but, in the prologue, you said the princess' smile could make even endymion's brother (a very serious guy) smile.... but romy doesn't sound serious at all! and then you said darien met serena on their wedding day. but romy has a flashback of some years before when he left for the earth and he asks endymion to take care of tys while he's away! please upload the rest of it soon, i'm curious to see what is gonna happen!
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Reviewed By: Rei the Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes, you're in luck. The inner senshi will be partaking. I don't know the outer senshi at all so I can't include them. I was tempted to add Tuxedo mask, but the tournament has enough boys already!
PS: Sorry I didn't read your story. |
Reviewed By: Demosthenes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH? What's going to happen? I have guesses as to where Romy's going to end up... but... Are Endymion and Serenity going to be together? Or will Romy be the victor to Serenity's heart? And does Romy get reborn after everyone dies or what? I wanna know!! This is a wonderful fic, so keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Demosthenes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2001 21:21 CST
Comment/Review:
For a first fic, it certainly is good. I usually catch first fics having the story written out like a script. I think this is a fic worth continuing!! ^^ (P.S. People of Mediaminer, learn to REVIEW!) |
