| "Moving On But Still Moving" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 04:45 CDT
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Doesn't seem to be too bad for a fic mostly populated with Mary-Sue's.
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 18:33 CST
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Like the new chapter, but maybe it is just me, but they seem short. Almost like you are watching a TV show and between chapters is where the commercials are suppose to be...
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Reviewed By: hackneyqueenextreme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more when you get a chance. this is a great story and needs more chapters. i will be watching the clock until there is more. -tabs-
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 (Not logged in) On: December 25, 2005 22:57 CST
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I'm going to kill you if you do not put up a new chapter soon. A NEW CHAPTER!!!!! Not updating old ones!!!!
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Title: Boo!
Reviewed By: Kitta0 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wana' be your beta reader for this story too! (I see a few mistakes....) Anyway I'm glade that you are writing on this story again I can wait for new chapters!
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 25, 2005 12:59 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Title: I miss you!
Reviewed By: Char_lylas On: September 11, 2005 19:40 CDT
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i din realli read all yer story...but i thought baby was a demon too?..oh well bye fer now love from, Amadis a.k.a. ~~~*Charlotte*~~~
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 16, 2005 10:47 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add ore to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 05, 2005 15:24 CDT
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i loved this two chapters. they were great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: Umh..
Reviewed By: Kitta0 (Not logged in) On: July 13, 2005 19:03 CDT
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Yeah more chapters, but did you know you had 'The Truth' as your Prologue? Just thought I'd let you know.
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Reviewed By: stix On: June 30, 2005 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this story.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 10:04 CDT
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lol plz write more!
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 (Not logged in) On: June 29, 2005 18:19 CDT
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*mouth drops open* You're getting as bad as me! Ahhhh, the world is coming to an end! Besides your sudenly horible spelling I'm glade you are rewriting this, I've missed it so much! Write more as soon as you can, but as you tell me "Try reading over it before you post." Love ya as a sister!
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