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Reviewed By: Dark Flame Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must continue!! I love this fiction.Please continue for the sake that is all right!! >.< =3 -gives cookies-
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Reviewed By: babaloo4u [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good!!! I like it a lot. I was a little grossed out at the whole brolly seen though in the second chapter, but that's okay ^_^; UPDATE SOON! I hate it when people don't finish their stories. But as long as you keep writing, i'll keep reading and reviewing. good luck w/ the rest of your story!!!!!!!
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