| "Beginnings" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: are going ?
Reviewed By: silence11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 01:14 CST
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i would like to know if you are going to contiue this story because i like what you have so far and i think you have graet talent with stories.
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Reviewed By: Shadowspirit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 15:04 CDT
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why the hell dont you update??!!!!
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Title: mistakes.
Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 11:05 CDT
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Also in my review is about my injury- I'm not having the best of times typing with all the typos I get while Im going to slow- so please bear with me (sweatdrop)
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Title: Working!
Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 11:03 CDT
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I got my forfox working! So Im sorry if you are mad at no updates! I was working ont he chapters, but if you check my profile youll see this is not a maj. project for me. I have a ff.net under same name that gets updated at least once every month- if you are so inclined. BUt with all the reviews I will continue this one! SUGGESTIONS WELCOME! I will find some good corssovers and they wiull goup under my favs...JUST FOR YOU GUYS! (silverflamingkistune) lol, sorry for inconvenience but I hope yo can helpo me! I love the encouragement! *And recommend my sotry poeples...* lol.
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Reviewed By: silverflamingkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story and cant wait til you update, i agree with Kin-chan Pandun though, so many questions that i would love answered. i really cant wait until she meets harry and what his reaction will be. not to mention the reactions of the teachers and rest of the school. well, please update soon, your story rocks thanks, silverflamingkitsune
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Reviewed By: red rose On: July 17, 2005 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so when does harry get to meet kagome? will shippou go to hogwarts too? update soon.
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Title: dragon
Reviewed By: tuskimiko On: July 05, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love your storys please email me when you update (dragonpixie14@aol.com). if you know any other good hp cross overs please tell me because i am haveing troble finding them thanks tuskimiko aka dragon
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Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 21:40 CDT
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Wow people! I love reviews! Squeeel! And to Kin-chan Pandun, I appreciate that review immensely! I didn't write off Ron, I just figured he ahs different skills, and Hermione kind of got written off too. Kag's eyes ARE blue, except one is kind of Moody-ish creepy- I'll expand upon that.The letter will be revealed,oOOOOOooOO! Kag was the younger sister, figure out her age, I'm only using general area (I might even make them twins).The next cahpter will have more of Kags POV, so history will come in. YEAH! Review MORE PEOPLE!
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Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 21:34 CDT
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Thanks for clearing that thing up...So she's unregistered will she be considered as a miko at all, is it relatively correct to the iy timeline?
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Title: review
Reviewed By: dawnstar28 On: June 25, 2005 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!! absoulutely love it!!! keep up the good work, i'll be waiting for your next update, and i hope that its soon. cant wait for your update. ciao, dawn
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Title: Review Chapter Two
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Once again, a wonderful story. I absolutely love the new chapter. I wonder what the contents of the letter are? What exactly is in it? what did Snape and Hagrid write in response? What's this about Kagome having a magic eye? How did she come by it? Was her own "removed" by a youkai? What happened to youkai that there are none in the present time? What's going on with the Sengoku Jidai? Does her magical eye act like Moody's does? Does she have a scar around it? What happened with the quest? Will Dumbledore finally get a beat-down from her? When will her english "mutts" find out what Kagome does with her summers? What will be Harry's reaction to her? Please don't write off Ron, I'm not a fangirl or anything, but I think you should try to keep it cannon, and Hagrid liking Ron is part of that. What happened to the Shikon? I like how Kagome being English explains her blue eyes. You are writing her with blue eyes, aren't you? Because only the anime gives her brown eyes, and that's a complete load of bullshit, because Rumiko Takakhashi gave her blue-grey eyes, you can check the manga covers to see if I'm wrong (which I'm not). I'm wondering how old Kagome is now. How much time has passed since her fiteenth birthday? Will Kagome change how Harry and Co. act towards Snape? Also, please, if there is romance for Harry, please pair him with Luna Lovegood. They are good for each other (anti-Cho and Ginny, here Cho=Ho & Ginny has moved on). Thanks! >>> |
Reviewed By: dark huntress On: June 24, 2005 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon.write more in the next chapter. it's james and lily potter's funeral, right? is the girl kagome? please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 22:25 CDT
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so which potter? james or harry, great teaser, ya roped them in
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Reviewed By: Crossover adict On: June 23, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, I am already hooked.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really like where you're going with this. The prose is wonderful, with little or no errors, so please continue. It's hard to find fanfiction of this quality.
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