| "Everbody Breaks" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: drkwndz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 05:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. I hope the guys get there in time to stop wufei from overdonig it on the first day since i didnt see sleep or food anywhere on his list of things to do. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Finally! Another chapter is put up! It was worth the wait, but I must have another chapter. When will the rest of the G-boys get to Wufei? Do they plan to give wufei a littl Lemon and TLC before getting into missions mode?
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Title: everybody breaks
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chaptere was well worth the wait. I'm glad to see that Wufei will not have to handle this situation alone and that the other pilots will be there to offer their love and support. I think that Wufei will be able to handle this situation much better having them there. But, even if they weren't able to make it I think that Wufei would have been alright. He has a strong inner core of strength that sustains him and he has an air of command that will garner trust from others around him. Looking forward to reading the next update fairly soon.
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 20:04 CDT
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The main story is coming along well. Personally, I don't think the point of view chapters add to the story, but that's just my opinion.
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Reviewed By: Vashta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this, it would be good for Fei to come back. Maybe they could start doing the training on L4, that way he could stay, move on to anew profession. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Ohhh. Likin the last chapter. Can us faithful readers see more in the future?
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Title: Discontinued?!
Reviewed By: roshynphina On: October 03, 2005 07:24 CDT
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Hi, this is a nice story, just wondering, has this story been discontinued? there have been no new chappies for awhile now...
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Title: everyone breaks
Reviewed By: darktora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!MORE!!!! I NEED MORE!! I never read one where Wufei is the pilot that breaks down! It's always Duo Quatre and Heero. Maybe one or two that it's Trowa, but I think only one has Wufei with any types of problems and that's drugs. I really like this..., no I LOVE this story!!! :) *wondering if she could write 3 or more reviews and sound like different people* I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!! Tora
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Title: interested
Reviewed By: Ceruleanfleur On: August 27, 2005 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you've got some interesting ideas. Some of your grammar is a little to be desired, as well as punctuation, but honestly, many seem to struggle with the ol' apostrophe. I like the addition of side characters, gives it more depth. The shifting of points of view is a little akward. The same effect could be achieved without it being first person, but while your approach may not be traditional, it works. This is one of the few logical reasonings I've seen for all five of the boys getting together. Please keep writing, and good luck.
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Title: Wonderful Stories!
Reviewed By: misslady [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 23:04 CDT
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Your writing is very good. It pulls a reader in and leaves them wanting more at the end of each chapter. Please continue this wonderful story! I will be a devoted reader till the end!! Please keep up the good work and if you need a beta reader please let me know!!
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Reviewed By: Jaboc On: August 24, 2005 15:34 CDT
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I loved your story, please write more, expecially of the Everybody Breaks piece.
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Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also send an email reply, but I basically just wanted to say that I really want to see this story continued. It has really been a pleasure to read and all of the characters are very well writtenand their emotions are depicted so very well. It would be a shame not see this story developed more because I want to watch as Wufei continues to emerge out of his shell and discover the person that he always wanted to be.
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Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams (not signed in) On: August 23, 2005 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good stuff. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: sound On: August 22, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE! I love both and I'll be really dissapointed if you don't continue. Your writing really is wonderful and is both creative and full of feeling. It's much better than most fics which are crudely done or basicly porn. Your fic gives me hope that fanfiction can be well done.
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Reviewed By: Scythe-chan On: August 21, 2005 23:24 CDT
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wahhh! i love both soo much! i like seeing t form the point of veiws AND the series@! ahhh! you HAVE to finish it!!! X3
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